disgruntled employee

a copy of the email i wrote today. i was going for "pissed off, yet still professional":

My direct deposit is still not working. What do we need to do to make it go through? I was told it would work this pay period. 4 pay periods ago I was told it would go through. What needs to be done? Do you need any more information from me? When will it go through? I should not have to come in on my day off to pick up my check when I have been told my direct deposit would go through. When will it work?

Joy